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Wow - "I felt everything in this"
by: Trisha

I felt everything in this... It made me cry bc I'm goin thru that rite now.. we got married 6 months ago && we have a 4 month old.. I found out in December that he'd been cheatin since I was 3 1/2 mons.

Pregnant.. we've been tryna work it out.. but everythings the same.. Ive been tryin so hard to find the strength to leave.. bc I knw I deserve better.. but its hard..great job btw..

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I Understand - "I agree with the others it's an extremely good poem"
by: Roger

You are right I understand this poem completely. The weird thing is in a guy and my girlfriend pretty much treated men the same as your poem says.

I know it's a bit more rare to work out like this, the other way around, but it happens. It helps a little to know I'm not the only one to be put through this though.

And I agree with the others it's an extremely good poem

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by: Anonymous

I totally agree I'm going through that right now

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inspiringg
by: Anonymous

i know exactly how you feel. this just made me cry. and i didnt know anyone else felt this way too

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To So True
by: Anonymous

I really aint been in that kind of situation beofre..but i know it hard to hurt bad. Im sorry you had to get bput threw that I really am.

I really dont know what would of done if i got put threw that. Im glad you liked the poem, alot of ppl say its a good poem but bad experience i got put threw to be able to feel all the pain.

But the way i know is you have to be put threw the pain to be able to write a poem that will help others..Thank you for reading the poem..

Thank You,
Stephanie Head

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so true
by: Anonymous

A great poem...too bad it is inspired by such a rotten experience. I had a similar situation but the man who was my boyfriend was a husband and father. I found out when he left his phone and it started ringing and the name that came up was "wife". Even after finding out he hoped we would continue our relationship!

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To k-
by: Anonymous

I just listened to that song.. Its a really good song i have to admit all of it is a homerun for me too.. i mean i have been in the same position.. Thank you alot for tellin me bout that song..

Thank You,
Stephanie Head

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To K-
by: Anonymous

No I havent heard it but i will be sure to listen to it..

Thank you,
Stephanie Head

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To Anna
by: Anonymous

Well theres not much i can say but yeah thats a guy for you to be honest... but, i know exactly how you feel i have been threw it.. the only thing i can really tell you is dont let him walk all over you. No guy is worth all your pain..


Thank You,
Stephanie Head

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So true...Really Am Broken
by: K-

Have you heard the song "It Kills Me" by Melanie Fiona?

Its very powerful and hits home for me...

K-

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wow...
by: Anna

That is full of how I feel. I still love him anyway, though. I hide my pain and my tears so that no one asks me about it. i feel like i'm some kind of puppet to him. and he only talks to me when he's bored or lonely, I call it 'bringing barbie out of the closet to play'... haha

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To Ashley Brooks
by: Stephanie head

Thank you. I'm really glad you liked it honestly I was thinking bout my past.. I really don't know if I'll write another one yetbut when I do I'll let you know when I do. Which I say I will but I really don't know when. Anyone that has been hurt can relate to it almost anyone can write there feelings into a poem. I hope your friends like it too thank you again.

Your friend,
Stephanie Head

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I really liked your poem.
by: Ashley Brooks

I really understand where you are coming from. That's a really good poem I really hope you write me I will look forward to reading another one. There's not many girls that will relate to it but if they do they will agree with you. What was you thinking bout when you wrote this? it really touched me when I read it. It was really good I'll be sure to tell my friends bout this. Hope to read another one from you. Bye



Your friend..
Ashley Brooks
New York

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